New Year
This one is still a work in progress. I wanted to capture the idea that the world is the same on New Year’s Day. It is only our mindset or attitude that opens up that feeling of a fresh start and new possibilities. This is something that we could potentially access at any time, but traditionally only do at a set agreed time.
I’ve stuck with the traditional 5/7/5 format (almost) but have also been playing with more looseness because it reads better:
The same birdsong
Heralds a new day or a new year
So far so good… but the ending just won’t fit
Fresh mind makes the difference / Your attitude makes the difference / New possibilities
I particularly liked the option:
Contiunuum of possibilities
for conveying a string of “nows” - but don’t count the syllables there. (To save you time - 10.)
Anyway; happy new beginnings and fresh mind :)