Pause
Breaking the 5/7/5 rules here - I’d like to say there is an an extra pause count on the pause (another cheeky grin).
Pause where you are.
Listen to the unvoiced dreams.
Follow your heart’s song
The original ending was: Follow the flow of breath. I still prefer it, but that’s a 6-count line.
I really do wonder how much scope there is for flexibility given that translations from Japanese are rarely exactly 5/7/5
